Wednesday, May 7, 2008

Plaintiffs rely on [affiant's] affidavit which is not only inadmissible
hearsay, it is incorrect.

Counsellor, I can excuse a failure to pair "not only" with "but also." It happens, though I don't like it. You have also, however, managed to generate both a comma splice and a comma omission in the same sentence. Wow.

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