tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-780549491824670956.post8418924162236148842..comments2020-02-05T20:51:29.315-08:00Comments on Lawyers['] Writing Wrongs: Where to begin?Legal Literatushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16189896195973555742noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-780549491824670956.post-9819727770298575812008-01-23T07:27:00.000-08:002008-01-23T07:27:00.000-08:00But wait, there's more!6. Two periods..7. "30 minu...But wait, there's more!<BR/><BR/>6. Two periods..<BR/>7. "30 minute" should be hyphenated as a compound adjective.<BR/><BR/>Okay, fine. That's all.Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14634767551688976468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-780549491824670956.post-14128801451750295502008-01-16T09:40:00.000-08:002008-01-16T09:40:00.000-08:00The Second segment of uncompensated occurs during ...The Second segment of uncompensated occurs during the Plaintiffs uncompensated thirty (30) minute meal/rest break.. Defendant's have deliberately instituted a time keeping system which forces Plaintiffs to work during their 30 minute rest period for no compensation.<BR/><BR/>1. Second should not be capitalized.<BR/>2. The first "Uncompensated." wth.<BR/>3. Plaintiffs lacks an apostrophe.<BR/>4. Defendant's has an unnecessary apostrophe.<BR/>5. Time keeping should be one word. <BR/>Boom.Smedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17167821484581683434noreply@blogger.com